- Class Av = 65%
Strengths
- excellent range of examples
- revision evident
- sound use of technical terminology
- analysis is developing - everyone avoided the 'shopping list' essay.
- good links back to task. A few areas drifted off but overall, good.
Areas for improvement
- Occasional confusion of terms - eg jump cuts
- Editing and sound underdeveloped
- Analysis needs to be pushed more still - keep linking and comment on micro elements.
- Don't forget about composition eg depth of field, framing etc. Look over notes again.
REMEMBER!
- 'Analysis is contextual rather than universal in value' - eg red could suggest passion, but could suggest power, anger etc. All depends on what's happening on screen.
- Representation is all about how the makers/producers want these characters and situations to be perceived.
- Some are analysing areas separately, but if doing it all at the same time, you must be strict and ensure all areas are dealt with sufficiently.
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